Comments

I like your use of the 'expanding trigger' mechanism. Making something more likely to happen on each successive role makes for a cool ticking clock.

I'm glad you like it! It adds a great element of increasing suspense to the whole thing.

Evocative and straightforward! I really like this :)

Thanks for the comment - evocative and straightforward is exactly what I was going for. I'm glad you like it!

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